It wasn't love at first sightIt was the zest of my being
It was all i ever dreamt of
It was my Paradise....
Startling was its effect,
heart was blessed with strength..
Soul was all tranquil..
No flickering thoughts i had..
i was never so sure before....
it was my urge to hold it close..
i wanted it to stay forever
but amidst this bliss, forgot my heart
whats forever is only CHANGE...
those long night walks,and lovely moon
those dreams of future,just me and you
It was all i had..
It was my breath of life....
"you are my heart's beacon
all faith dwells in you
all promises made are true
words will always seem few" i said...
ecstasy was divine, to feel it was all mine
i would treasure it always,i knew deep within...
suddenly it seemed delusion
truth got faint and dim..
was it grief in disguise?
or overwhelmed lonely soul?
I may be wrong...
I may be all mistaken...
I stand forlorn, and of what i am sure is,
I have a long road home.....
~भावना..
gullu ye tune likha ????
ReplyDeletenice work.. :)
:p thnkuuuuu
ReplyDeleteyeah this is life and things do not turn out the way we wanted them to be or how we had perceived them to be...and turning back is surely "A long Road Home". Good job girl, i enjoyed the feel of it .
ReplyDelete@saumya: glad u liked it...
ReplyDeletehey.. u cud be so thoughtful??? Wow... its 2 gud .. actualli d harsh reality of lyf....
ReplyDelete@swar: yes i can be thoughtful girl...!! thnxxx for the compliment...
ReplyDeletesincere comments comes your way....its thoughtful of you to write on a subject that shows us the mirror of reality n how we encounter every obstacle in life....'whats forever is change'---these words are true...there is satire in ur creation but i would like to say what stays with us is our family n few friends n our confidence to outlast any trouble in life.
ReplyDeleteso have faith and very good poem.